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  • SanguinePar
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    1 month ago

    Agreed with all that. Depending on how much manipulation was deemed acceptable, I’d also be tempted to paint out the bridge and boats on the right, to suggest that beyond the house lies the open ocean. That’s cheating of course, but it’d look cool I think.

    Very rough version done on my phone: