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minus-square𝕾𝖕𝖎𝖈𝖞 𝕿𝖚𝖓𝖆linkEnglish9•edit-214 days agoShow, don’t tell. The author also broke that rule in Panel 5 with “sex change occurs sounds” written off to the side. We see the 𝓶𝓪𝓰𝓲𝓬 𝓫𝓾𝓫𝓫𝓵𝓮. Clearly, that means the sex change occurred in the context of the setup. We get it, dude.
Show, don’t tell. The author also broke that rule in Panel 5 with “sex change
occurssounds” written off to the side. We see the 𝓶𝓪𝓰𝓲𝓬 𝓫𝓾𝓫𝓫𝓵𝓮. Clearly, that means the sex change occurred in the context of the setup. We get it, dude.