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Walking up to the edge of the cliff, the two young women stopped, then lowered their hoods as they gazed down at the village.
Enid Sinclair, her pink, blue and blonde hair blowing in the dust filled wind, stared at the sand blasted buildings a moment longer, then turned and looked at her companion, her pale pink eyes filled with the obvious question.
“Hogsmeade Village” Luna Lovegood replied “You will never find a more wretched hive of scum and villainy” She paused “But if we’re to find answers, it’s as good a place as any”
“What if they find us?” Enid asked in a voice that was nearly a whisper.
“They have no presence here” Luna shook her head “The Master has no love for The Dark Ones” She paused “He may not speak to us, but he will not sell us out”
“So we go?” Enid looked down at the village again. Luna took a long slow breath, then let it out.
“We go” She nodded. They both raised the hoods, covering their hair and cloaking their faces in shadow. A moment later, Enid held out her hand, and Luna took it. A moment after that, they jumped.