That part is true, but that doesn’t mean you need to lurch into conspiratorial thinking to try to explain it.
There’s a much simpler explanation: the Democrats did what their large corporate donors forced them to do in order to continue receiving the bribes.
It’s corrupt, but it’s neither a conspiracy nor required any sort of coordination with the Republicans. It’s simply an emergent property of a plutocratic system.
The system itself has to be dismantled; singling out the participants in it for individual/single group blame feels good and is morally justified, but doesn’t actually work to solve the problem.
In other words, you largely aren’t wrong, but you wrote it in a way that made you sound like an unserious nutjob. If your goal is to persuade, you should rethink your phrasing.
That part is true, but that doesn’t mean you need to lurch into conspiratorial thinking to try to explain it.
There’s a much simpler explanation: the Democrats did what their large corporate donors forced them to do in order to continue receiving the bribes.
It’s corrupt, but it’s neither a conspiracy nor required any sort of coordination with the Republicans. It’s simply an emergent property of a plutocratic system.
The system itself has to be dismantled; singling out the participants in it for individual/single group blame feels good and is morally justified, but doesn’t actually work to solve the problem.
In other words, you largely aren’t wrong, but you wrote it in a way that made you sound like an unserious nutjob. If your goal is to persuade, you should rethink your phrasing.