• ddh
    link
    fedilink
    5
    edit-2
    1 month ago

    Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.

    • @Valmond
      link
      -51 month ago

      Thank you captain obvious.

      • ddh
        link
        fedilink
        31 month ago

        So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?

        • @Valmond
          link
          -2
          edit-2
          1 month ago

          Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s

          Live Laugh Love Level.