Poetry • 3 days ago

Heaven is a Peanut Farm [OC]

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Heaven is a Peanut Farm [OC]

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Poetry • 3 days ago

Heaven is a peanut farm

One for you and me

With friends and music, banquets and balls

And a good man named Jimmy

Heaven is a peanut farm

Surely it’s the best

There’s a porch with a sleeping dog

One where you can find rest

They say there is a man out there

Who made sure every heart he would fill

When God said “it’s okay, you can stop your work now”

He said “no, I don’t think I will”

When you come to this peanut farm

You will be filled with this delight

Friends and family, we gather 'round

To wish Mr. Carter goodnight

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5•3 days ago
So it’s not particularly brilliant poetry, but the sentiment is making it a bit difficult for me to see my screen at the moment.
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  3•3 days ago
  Sounds like it did it’s job :)
  - @rhacer
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    2•3 days ago
    A man I admired greatly. Thank you.

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