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minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish4•1 month agoKiller comic. Last panel’s a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: “This is causing all the world’s problems.”
minus-squareEpheralinkfedilinkEnglish5•1 month agoThere’s a trope that many comics can be improved, if you remove the last panel. I do believe this to be one such case…
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink1•1 month agoI think removing the text bubble and just having the character’s shocked impression would be a good choice.
Killer comic. Last panel’s a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: “This is causing all the world’s problems.”
Something like this?
Nice!
There’s a trope that many comics can be improved, if you remove the last panel. I do believe this to be one such case…
I think removing the text bubble and just having the character’s shocked impression would be a good choice.