MrSebSinM to Bello Bear • 2 days ago15 Jan 2025 Salad – If you like, please share with friends and family to help Bello Bear grow!sh.itjust.worksimagemessage-square4fedilinkarrow-up14arrow-down11file-text
arrow-up13arrow-down1image15 Jan 2025 Salad – If you like, please share with friends and family to help Bello Bear grow!sh.itjust.worksMrSebSinM to Bello Bear • 2 days agomessage-square4fedilinkfile-text
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minus-square@RustyNovalink3•1 day agoI see. Now it’s clearer why it’s a bit clumsy for now. For now it’s not for me, but with time and experience that will surely change I feel like you should do strips instead of a single image. The pacing of the story would probably improve. For example: Avery talking about the meaning of the universe Bello complaining about the lack of specials, and picking on the compost part then having the joke that it will only be Caesar salad
minus-squareMrSebSinOPMlinkfedilink1•1 day agoAgreed and I do have a four panel version I’m working on and will start implementing. Thanks for checking them out and the feedback :)
I see. Now it’s clearer why it’s a bit clumsy for now. For now it’s not for me, but with time and experience that will surely change
I feel like you should do strips instead of a single image. The pacing of the story would probably improve. For example:
Agreed and I do have a four panel version I’m working on and will start implementing. Thanks for checking them out and the feedback :)