Eh… if this were written in high school it’d be promising. In college, not a bad first draft. In grad school, if this is the result of several revisions then you’re definitely not top of the class.
Well, there’s meaning, but it’s the idiotic “you should hustle e.g. it’s not your employers job to teach you but rather you should spend time outside of work leveling up tech skills to stay competitive.”
Where’s the
“He had been doing bootcamps every day now, 4 hours a night after his 8 hour day, and had no mental energy to spend on his wife, so she left him in that situation too, because the idea that you should devote your entire life to generating value for a corporation is bonkers.”
That’s really good creative writing and really bad LinkedIn posting.
It would be good creative writing if you couldn’t feel the vast corporate void behind these words
No no no, that’s what gives flavor to the text!
Eh… if this were written in high school it’d be promising. In college, not a bad first draft. In grad school, if this is the result of several revisions then you’re definitely not top of the class.
I would consider it excellent linkedin posting!
It’s not even good creative writing either, it’s just nice sounding words devoid of actual meaningful substance.
Well, there’s meaning, but it’s the idiotic “you should hustle e.g. it’s not your employers job to teach you but rather you should spend time outside of work leveling up tech skills to stay competitive.”
Where’s the
“He had been doing bootcamps every day now, 4 hours a night after his 8 hour day, and had no mental energy to spend on his wife, so she left him in that situation too, because the idea that you should devote your entire life to generating value for a corporation is bonkers.”