Oof, that would be quite a long list. Basically everything could be improved or at least clarified, but I would have to ask something first:
What is the intended target audience for the tenets? Members? The general public? Converts? Specifically christian sect (Mormons, LDS, etc) exiteers from north america? Refugees from non-christian religions?
No, they haven’t. What do you suggest changing?
Oof, that would be quite a long list. Basically everything could be improved or at least clarified, but I would have to ask something first:
What is the intended target audience for the tenets? Members? The general public? Converts? Specifically christian sect (Mormons, LDS, etc) exiteers from north america? Refugees from non-christian religions?