It’s been several decades since I’ve opened my photography up for critique. I was a photography major back in the day and gave it up as a professional track so i could feed and house myself. I now really only share my photos with three friends. But there isn’t much in the way of actionable feedback - I’d love to hear your thoughts.

This photo was taken on a piece of white paper under a skylight on a cloudy day with my iPhone. I made a few small edits to bring the reds out (such a hard color to get right in digital photography).

  • Krob
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    21 year ago

    Not entirely sure what to make of this one. It’s doing the opposite of what I expect of a withering flower shot. I was expecting moody soft light but the light is quite hard and I kind of dig that. It brings out the details in the flower. The thing that does throw me though is the white background a coloured background would do a lot for this shot I recon. Did you try any other colours?

    It’s a scary thing to let randomers critique your work. I have only done it once myself but might post one later today if I’m feeling brave enough.

    • @dsignedOP
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      11 year ago

      I hear what you are saying about the background. I have some on a black and white background (white computer paper and my leather couch). I’m kinda lazy about taking photos - I only use what I’ve got on hand.

      I think wood - where the tone /richness of color was more similar to the flower would have changed the experience and the starkness of the photo in an interesting way. I’ll poke at that next time I’ve got some interesting flowers dying at home. Thanks!

      I’m a product designer by trade, so I’m pretty used to critique. I spend so much time at work with people critiquing my output, I liked taking photos just for my pleasure. I’m not sure I’m growing in my photography any more though. So … here I am. I really do hope you feel courage to share. Your insights are fantastic!

      • Krob
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        11 year ago

        I do photography for a living, but honestly I find shooting a billboard campaign less stressful then posting in a community like this. I don’t put paid work up but I’ll see if I have something else.

        You are saying your kind of lazy when it comes to taking photos as well as not growing in your photography, but do they not go hand in hand? Obviously it’s about finding time as well and I sure could do with a bit more of a lazy approach sometimes.

        • @dsignedOP
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          11 year ago

          Yeah - I can see that. Feels more personal here. So far it’s been a good experience.

          Touché. Yup, improving on my craft doesn’t go to well with being lazy. You need some opportunities to approach it from a lazy view point, and I clearly need to up my game.