• @Agrivar
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    211 months ago

    maybe you wanna try another round of editing? still reads like gibberish to my eyes…

    • @[email protected]
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      -311 months ago

      At this point its not my fault anymore my dude or dudette

      Sounds pretty coherent to me

      • VulKendov
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        11 months ago

        I understood it, only change I’d make now is ‘woman’ to ‘women’.

        Edit: also missed a ‘get’ between ‘can’t’ and ‘enough’.