I have a few erotic short stories I’m working on, and in one of them I’ve arrived to the sex scene. During outlining it, I questioned if the guy should cum multiple times. Is it hotter if they don’t, or does the lack of realism take you out of the story?

Are there any other porn-logic tropes in stories that turn you on or off?

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    59 months ago

    If the guy is going to cum multiple times and he’s older than 21 then make sure to account for the 20-40 min of fooling around before he’s hard again. At 19 he can probably go 2-3 times before getting soft.