• @VelvetStorm
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    18 months ago

    Great composition but I feel like the pose could be better.

    • MaybeALittleBitWeird
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      38 months ago

      I agree that the composition is great as usual, but disagree that the posing is poor. The posing is great given the space.

      • @VelvetStorm
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        28 months ago

        Didn’t say it was poor. I think if she had her hips angled a bit more it would show off the butt more and would make her appear more slim(not that she isn’t slim already and not that she isn’t already beautiful. That’s just what you normally see in these style of photos).

        • VioletOP
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          38 months ago

          Its ok :) Constructive critiscm is welcomed.

          The thing is that im being model and photographer. I make a composition, set a scene and then take pictures with a timer. This particular set was hard to do cause my lens focus kept shifting. Big difference in light between me behind or before the camera. I got alot of blurry shots.

          I kinda do agree with the pose remark, it is true that in these type of pics you see more angled hips. I decided to keep this one because… im not a professional model, i do not wanna promote unrealistic or unhealthy beautystandards. Showing a bit of tummy, my natural waistline, its a body positivity thing really.

          Its home made porn and should be relatable to women and girls, not only enticing for men.

          • @VelvetStorm
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            28 months ago

            Absolutely agree it’s natural and should be the standard and again you have a beautiful body.

            Have you tried setting the focus to manual and then putting like a tall lamp or something right where you want to stand and then focusing on that then moving it?

            I appreciate you taking my comment in good spirits as it was definitely not meant to be harsh.

        • MaybeALittleBitWeird
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          18 months ago

          This isn’t meant to be framed as a social media post and with this lighting that specific pose would actually look quite awkward I think. I’m also a big proponent of accepting that women have organs in general and over-editing of media is harmful to body image. (I’m not implying anything about you with that statement, just an assertion of my personal philosophy since you mentioned the need to appear slim)

          • @VelvetStorm
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            18 months ago

            If you look at my other reply, you will see that I actually agree with you on that. I only said that because this is styled as a Boudoir photo, and that is typical the types of things people go for in them.