• @looklucOP
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      214 days ago

      Thank you so much!

  • Jo Miran
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    115 days ago

    I’d skip the text overlays as they “meme-ify” the film. Also, I replaced the audio with REM’s Everybody Hurts and it fit the vibe quite nicely.

    • @looklucOP
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      214 days ago

      I don’t understand “meme-ify” but ok. I tried listening with that song and damn, you’re right, it does!

      • Jo Miran
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        114 days ago

        I mean that the typeface you used is commonly used in memes. It just seems like it would have looked nicer with the title in a single title card screen rather than have pieces of it flashing and jumping around in the first few clips. It seems hyper, erratic, funny (again, in a meme way), and at odds with the vibe of the rest of the film.

        • @looklucOP
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          114 days ago

          Thank you for de feedback!