• @[email protected]
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    29 hours ago

    This limerick has to be forced to have a decent flow. Who emphasizes the first syllable in “assured”? Lines 3 and/or 4 would probably flow better with an extra syllable, but are otherwise ok and have consistent feet.

    Final verdict: 5/10, needs work

    Also, the little logo at the bottom is trying way too hard

    • Maestro
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      221 day ago

      He wants to appear tall, so he’s wearing giant lifts. Basically high heels disguised as normal shoes

    • Clay_pidgin
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      122 days ago

      I’ve read that it’s a symptom of dementia, but I have no idea how credible that was.

    • @ikidd
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      91 day ago

      He’s a fat fuck.