• @warbond
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    51 day ago

    Great poem. It definitely feels like waking up from a pleasant dream. I wonder about the (I do.) at the end. It’s so present tense, like an aside. Is it him talking to the reader? Or is it an echo of vows? And if so, whose?

    • @[email protected]
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      1 day ago

      I think it’s in answer to: “remember?” and it’s also the last action the author takes in the poem.