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BonesOfTheMoon to Poetry · 2 days ago

Pedro Pietri, "Telephone Booth (number 905 1/2).

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Pedro Pietri, "Telephone Booth (number 905 1/2).

BonesOfTheMoon to Poetry · 2 days ago
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  • Coelacanth@feddit.nu
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    Hah, that’s pretty funny. Especially with the opening being a subversion of the stereotypical blues opening. What do we call this inversion of the blues, “the bliss”?

    • BonesOfTheMoonOP
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      I think we should!

      • Remember_the_tooth
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        🎵

        Well, I woke up this mo’nin’,

        And I was feelin’ too good.

        (Oh yeah, that’s right)

        Yes, I woke up this mo’nin’,

        And I was feelin’ too good.

        Think I’ll prob’ly call in to work,

        And take a stroll 'round…

        My neighborhood.

        [Harmonica solo]

        • atomicbocks@sh.itjust.works
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          You may enjoy Weird Al’s Callin’ in Sick.

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            I did enjoy that. Thank you!

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