• BonesOfTheMoonOP
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      28 days ago

      I’m not sure it is a poem entirely either, but I like it. The others I posted are definitely poems.

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        28 days ago

        Oh, it’s a poem, the definition lies largely in the intention.

        However, it’s not enjoyable as a poem. It is good advice though! As noted. Just lacking in any musicality or sense of lyrical I/thou relations or story or even the irony of prophet soapboxing.

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      28 days ago

      I was reading a police report about a person with concealed carry who had to kill a pit bull who was attacking a child the other day, and I was thinking that I live where I’ve never seen a gun that wasn’t on a cop or belonging to a hunter, and how bizarre it would be for me to need one.