BonesOfTheMoon to memes · 2 years agoWon't someone think of the yachters.imagemessage-square76linkfedilinkarrow-up1876arrow-down129
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minus-squareDrElementarylinkfedilinkarrow-up6·2 years ago“I’m a bitch” 3 syllables “I’m an orca” 4 syllables “Sinking yachts” 3 syllables “Off Majorca” 4 syllables Adding “Just” makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern
minus-squaresamus12345linkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·2 years agoAlso, “Imma hit you with my tail” is one syllable too many. “I’ll” would work better.
minus-squaresamus12345linkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·2 years agoIt’s awkward, especially since the “just” is completely unnecessary.
“I’m a bitch”
3 syllables
“I’m an orca”
4 syllables
“Sinking yachts”
3 syllables
“Off Majorca”
4 syllables
Adding “Just” makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern
Also, “Imma hit you with my tail” is one syllable too many. “I’ll” would work better.
5 works just fine.
It’s awkward, especially since the “just” is completely unnecessary.