Still working on background. Critiques? I feel like I over did it with the line work…
As for the work of art:
With a fierce yell, he charges forward, gripping the battered axe as blaster fire scorches the air around him. He knows he won’t survive, but with each step, he feels the weight of his fallen friends at his back—this last stand is not for victory, but for vengeance, a final tribute in blood and fire.
Took your advice and others for this revision!
The drawing was already great before, but now this looks amazing! The character really stands out from the background, and the haze of the far buildings really helps to work with the awesome perspective!
Thank you! I really like how it turned out. I appreciate your advice!