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minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink44•3 months agoThis reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
minus-squareDrusaslinkfedilink4•3 months agoFor some of us, the lack of commas does make it hard to read.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink26•3 months agoAlright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad. I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
minus-squareArthur Besselinkfedilink4•3 months agoi read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink2•3 months agoLmao that’ll do it! And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
This reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
For some of us, the lack of commas does make it hard to read.
where would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
Alright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that’s not so bad.
I’m raising my kids by “if you have anything nice to say, say it” and “if you have anything nice you can do, do it”.
i read it twice and somehow didn’t notice the word “do” appears twice 🤡
Lmao that’ll do it!
And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
That’ll do do it!