I struggle to find the goal of this comic. Is it like a story? Random jokes?
Because from what I’m seeing is similar looking comics with random conversations in it
Thanks for the comment. At this point I’m still developing things and it’s pretty much random, amusing conversations. Sadly I only have so much time to dedicate to it since I’m still running my graphics business. I plan to devote a lot more time to it and post everyday as it continues to grow in audience and hopefully become a source of income.
The idea is telling stories through Bello and his various daily customers. I have a bunch more characters and the art will change a lot more as it moves along. Here’s the lineup so far…
I struggle to find the goal of this comic. Is it like a story? Random jokes? Because from what I’m seeing is similar looking comics with random conversations in it
Thanks for the comment. At this point I’m still developing things and it’s pretty much random, amusing conversations. Sadly I only have so much time to dedicate to it since I’m still running my graphics business. I plan to devote a lot more time to it and post everyday as it continues to grow in audience and hopefully become a source of income.
The idea is telling stories through Bello and his various daily customers. I have a bunch more characters and the art will change a lot more as it moves along. Here’s the lineup so far…
I see. Now it’s clearer why it’s a bit clumsy for now. For now it’s not for me, but with time and experience that will surely change
I feel like you should do strips instead of a single image. The pacing of the story would probably improve. For example:
Agreed and I do have a four panel version I’m working on and will start implementing. Thanks for checking them out and the feedback :)