• @CommissarVulpin
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      2 days ago

      The clock strikes five

      I start to laugh

      I’m taking a shit

      On time and a half

      • @[email protected]
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        41 day ago

        Translation: Even if your bowels are ripping, never go break shitting.

        I tried to keep the rhyme, even if the English translation isn’t grammaticaly correct.

        • @[email protected]
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          21 day ago

          Maybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”?

          It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional