But the original lists two qualities: athleticism and urination quantity. You’ve reduced them to urinators. What does “athletic urination” even entail?
I meant to express the distance and directionality combined with vigour of the pizzle deployment, as well as the copious quantities and frequency of piss.
I guess you have to watch a tapir wandering around spraying piss over absolutely everything within reach in order to really understand.
But the original lists two qualities: athleticism and urination quantity. You’ve reduced them to urinators. What does “athletic urination” even entail?
To be more explicit: a short example.
why did it do that
Territory. Plus maybe ‘go away’?
I dunno. Craft it into your new supervillain’s backstory.
I meant to express the distance and directionality combined with vigour of the pizzle deployment, as well as the copious quantities and frequency of piss.
I guess you have to watch a tapir wandering around spraying piss over absolutely everything within reach in order to really understand.