fireweed to Books · 8 days agoThe "Dungeon Crawler Carl" series is just one brand new sentence after another [note: contains spoilers for The Gate of the Feral Gods]imagemessage-square41linkfedilinkarrow-up177arrow-down112file-textcross-posted to: brandnewsentence
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cross-posted from: https://lemmy.world/post/51348308 From The Gate of the Feral Gods by Matt Dinniman
minus-squareStarya67linkfedilinkarrow-up1·7 days agoI’m not after beautiful prose, I want him to use the correct words! And to be accurate or at least comprehensible. I want to see a picture when a writer describes something. I don’t want to read an entire page and see nothing in my head whatsoever.
minus-squareglimselinkfedilinkarrow-up1·7 days agoMaybe Matt Dinniman has aphantasia, too, which is why the minimal descriptions work fine for me and less so for you.
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I’m not after beautiful prose, I want him to use the correct words! And to be accurate or at least comprehensible. I want to see a picture when a writer describes something. I don’t want to read an entire page and see nothing in my head whatsoever.
Maybe Matt Dinniman has aphantasia, too, which is why the minimal descriptions work fine for me and less so for you.