• fmstrat
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    541 year ago

    The headline buries the lead. He calls all soldiers “killers.” This an article everyone should read.

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        • 【J】【u】【s】【t】【Z】
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          Wow can find anything on the internet.

          It is lede.

          Maybe they don’t use that when publishing blogs but it’s used in serious formal writing, academia and law.

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              Well then. Let’s check the authority on diction…

              https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/bury

              https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/lede

              https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/lead

              Which noun form of lead can be “buried,” such that the sentence has prepositional phrase agreement? Talkin’ 'bout physically burying something underneath backfill.

              With lead, I’ll concede people have fucked it up enough in modern usage to warrant entry in the dictionary, but it’s a quatiary definition, 2(f)(1). Even that definition literally ends in a coda, says “go look up LEDE, you f’n goofball.”

              And for lede? It’s not numbered, lettered, and numbered again, because it’s the only thing lede means. “Bury the lede.” What a sentence. Evokes the typesetter sitting over the moveable type press, laying out every character, with the most important feature of the story down, below a bunch of fill. It’s how you should write. Clear, concise. Good diction. I may die on this hill a hero.

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                  Acceptable maybe, but one is more correct. And lede is more correct because of what it evokes, the typesetter moving the lines of movable type, literally burying the lede.

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      • fmstrat
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        The lede is the opening paragraph. This was not burried.

    • @[email protected]
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      -221 year ago

      I hate trump. But is he wrong? American soldiers are killers. Willingly joining wars where they are the aggressors and bomb schools and hospitals.

      • @Cabrio
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        111 year ago

        Not every soldier carries a gun. 70% of the US military is logistics.

        • Ertebolle
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          71 year ago

          I can’t find the original comment but I think somebody said once that the real sign of the strength of the US military is that they can set up a Taco Bell anywhere on Earth in 72 hours.

          • @Cabrio
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            51 year ago

            The US military has an ice cream barge. A navy vehicle specifically for producing and distributing ice cream to their soldiers in combat arenas.

      • @Maggoty
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        81 year ago

        The average teenager has no realization about that stuff. The three main motivators for military service were (and remain) escaping poverty, service tradition, and ideology. And once you’ve enlisted the only choice is war or prison.

        I have a lot more scorn for the adults that let Bush do it then I do for kids who didn’t have a chance in hell of realizing what this country does with soldiers and veterans.

      • @[email protected]
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        71 year ago

        Even if he is right, he owes it to people to make the POLICY ARGUMENT rather than just shit on some veterans to protect his brand.

        If he came out and said “veterans make Republicans look bad because of all their bad wars” maybe we’d cut him some slack.

      • @dragonflyteaparty
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        41 year ago

        The overhead to support one soldier is massive. But if we want to start referring to soldiers as killers, disparage the military, and make people think badly of them, then why spend so much money on it? Or do we just want to entice people to do a job everyone will look down on, blow a bunch of money on something everyone thinks is terrible, and treat those people like shit?