Same. Great use of color but the composition could be stronger. The cacti seem a bit similar in shape/size so my eyes see a bit of a cut/paste effect on two planes. The ones in the background seem to be in a straight line giving a flat appearance when staggering them a bit would add a greater sense of depth. All-in-all I think this is really nice and I hope you keep posting here!
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Saguaro Deset Sunset, acrylic on primed hardboard
Awesome use of color. Love those contrasts around the dun. Not a fan of the composition of your cacti though.
Same. Great use of color but the composition could be stronger. The cacti seem a bit similar in shape/size so my eyes see a bit of a cut/paste effect on two planes. The ones in the background seem to be in a straight line giving a flat appearance when staggering them a bit would add a greater sense of depth. All-in-all I think this is really nice and I hope you keep posting here!
This sounds like very constructive feedback. Glad to see it.
Thanks for taking the time to think about it.