MacN'Cheezus to Comic StripsEnglish • edit-28 months agoMaking Friends 101lemmy.todayimagemessage-square21fedilinkarrow-up1895arrow-down19file-text
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minus-squareMacN'CheezusOPlinkfedilinkEnglish22•8 months agoBut then he’d be going there after he arrived already
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink29•8 months agoReveal it on a sign in the room or by revealing a blackboard with it written then
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink16•8 months agoOr teacher coming in announcing the class, “welcome to making friends 101”
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish4•8 months agoAlso easily fixed by just removing the dinosaur from the first panel.
minus-square@Seasm0kelink4•8 months agoHa don’t get me wrong its still good. You could fix that with a runner that says 5 min ago it earlier that day or remove the Dino. Subverting expectations is a big part of the laugh for me but your joke is great.
Kinds wish they moved panel 1 to 4 for the reveal
But then he’d be going there after he arrived already
Reveal it on a sign in the room or by revealing a blackboard with it written then
Or teacher coming in announcing the class, “welcome to making friends 101”
Also easily fixed by just removing the dinosaur from the first panel.
Ha don’t get me wrong its still good. You could fix that with a runner that says 5 min ago it earlier that day or remove the Dino. Subverting expectations is a big part of the laugh for me but your joke is great.