• @d00ery
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    2 months ago

    I will bitch about heat.,
    I will bitch about cold.
    I will bitch about sunshine,
    and about growing old.
    I will bitch about everything,
    inside and out.
    And if there is nothing,
    Well I’ll bitch about that.

    Very good, I had a go at an alternate ending.

    • ✺roguetrick✺
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      2 months ago

      I’ll bitch about rhyming,

      But not about the meter.

      Because you broke the first,

      And the second was meager.