• tisktisk
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    217 days ago

    bed THAT IS about TO wake up*
    Ow, it hurts, had to band-aid quick

    • @JayDee
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      16 days ago

      “The wild boar I drugged with fentanyl is under the bed , about to wake up.”

      It just needed a comma, not more words. An ‘and’ would have also sufficed.

      Edit: also your correction communicates that the bed is about to wake up instead of the boar.

      • tisktisk
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        416 days ago

        huh, you’re right. It is the boar waking up not the bed.

        …not sure how I got this one wrong /s