@CantaloupeLifestyle to politics English • 7 months agoSecret Service agents protecting Biden’s granddaughter open fire when 3 people try to break into SUVapnews.comexternal-linkmessage-square200arrow-up1608arrow-down137cross-posted to: [email protected]
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minus-squareEl Bartolink3•7 months agoYou just made me realize that the original headline doesn’t specify that the SUV is where the granddaughter is. You also make that mistake. I think we can do better. Let’s see: Secret Service open fire at thieves who unknowingly attempted to break into SUV carrying Biden’s granddaughter. And I still think we can do better, but right now I’m le tired.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish9•edit-27 months agoThe vehicle was empty, it wasn’t carrying anyone.
minus-squareEl Bartolink2•7 months agoAh, serves me right for not reading TFA. In that case I would have simply written what @[email protected] wrote in this very thread.
You just made me realize that the original headline doesn’t specify that the SUV is where the granddaughter is. You also make that mistake.
I think we can do better. Let’s see:
Secret Service open fire at thieves who unknowingly attempted to break into SUV carrying Biden’s granddaughter.
And I still think we can do better, but right now I’m le tired.
The vehicle was empty, it wasn’t carrying anyone.
Ah, serves me right for not reading TFA.
In that case I would have simply written what @[email protected] wrote in this very thread.