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minus-square@helpImTrappedOnlinelinkEnglish7•edit-211 months agoGet rid of the top panels and all text and the joke will still land. If you really want, swap the top left and bottom left to make it clear early on its cold. However, this was made for newspapers, they care a bit more about panel count.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilinkEnglish1•11 months agoCombine the door in the second to last panel with him walking with Odie frozen.
minus-square@ZehzinlinkEnglish3•edit-211 months agoYou could have the same joke with just the last 2 panels
There’s so many unnecessary lines 🫨
Get rid of the top panels and all text and the joke will still land. If you really want, swap the top left and bottom left to make it clear early on its cold.
However, this was made for newspapers, they care a bit more about panel count.
Combine the door in the second to last panel with him walking with Odie frozen.
You could have the same joke with just the last 2 panels