• @[email protected]
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    2810 months ago

    Line delivery is one of my special interests, so I’m sorry about this, but the original line ends with “any further” and it is such a good line. Something about it implies “I could go much further than this if I pleased”, and it exudes casual menace the way those extra syllables just roll off his… loudspeaker.

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        10 months ago

        The original trilogy is laser etched into my brain and the word “again” was like a splinter in my mind, driving me mad.

        I tried to at least be entertaining and informative with my well ackshually anyway :)

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          810 months ago

          When I saw it, I was like “oh shit, they’re right”. But rather than admit my mistake, I assaulted you personally, as is the way of the internet.